night breeze
i was sitting outside on the deck tonight and the evening was perfect. the temperature comfortable with a warm breeze, bugs were chirping, trees dancing. somehow i was inspired to write a hiaku. i haven’t written or read poetry since high school and didn’t particularly enjoy it. but this was just what came out of me. i’m not even sure its right or follows all the rules, but i don’t care.
crickets sing thru night
warm wind blows summer away
lights glow from within
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Great hiaku!
And you did follow the rules.
Posted on 09/19 at 12:54 AM